Thoughts on my created ad of the surface?

So Im making an ad of the Surface, and I want to share it for improvements.

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the surface keyboard is highlighted because it is a work in progress( im tracing it) , and i will hand-draw the whole thing to make it look different.

do you think "iWhat?" Is witty and understandable? is there a better term that you can think of?

Im planning on filling in each of the 3 squares with some feature information.