Attempt @ objective comparison b/w Android/iOS

*EDIT* I've recently overhauled the entire post and made it much more to the point, and easier to read. New link is:

I've posted an attempt to make an objective comparison between Android 4.0 and iOS 5.0 on my blog, and I was wondering if anyone could take a look at it and lend me some suggestions/criticisms. I want to make sure everything is factually correct, as that's important to me. Please leave feedback HERE, or in the comments on the blog.

Thanks! Let me know if I need to add/change/remove anything.