I'm a budding games journo

Hey there Gaming!

Like the title suggests, I'm a budding games journalist for a little website called Digital Noob. Anyway, I just recently put up my latest article and thought I'd spread the word about it a little bit and see if I can get some opinions on it.

Article is found here: "You Got Movies in my Games"

Thanks guys! Hope you enjoy it, I tried to really put my voice in to it. I'd love to hear what you think.

SMALL EDIT: Since the first comment here decided to claim spam. I in no way benefit personally from linking you to the article on the hosted site. When they brought me on to do some freelance writing for them they asked that I don't specifically post my same content with other sites, and I am trying to be courteous of that.

If you don't want to read it, that's fine. I just want to get some criticism on my writing.