Amateur Short Film

Hi Guys. My friend has recently published a short film that he has been working on for an amateur film competition. At the moment, he's looking for some constructive feedback which would help to better his chances. As it hasn't gotten too many views, I thought I'd ask around. Bear in mind that it is his first release, and he was working on an extremely low budget (hence the camera quality). If you've got a few minutes, he'd love some feedback. Thank you!

Jake & Dave (via Thomas Evans)