Gaming News Vlog Suggestions

Hey everybody, i'm Qtbear, i have a youtube channel and today i've started to make a daily vlog 2mins long of news from the geek world, i was wondering if you guys have any suggestions on how to make it better :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=deLh-AtZdFs

I'm not here to spam or anything, i've chosen this website because i think it's the best where to ask stuff like this