Thanks for pointing that out. I try to use the Queen’s English where I can but I’m sure you understand that it is not as critical in a comment as it is in a mass-directed article. I am definitely being sincere as I wish him all the best. We all need some advice from time-to-time.
Dave Zatz: I just wanted to provide you with some constructive feed back. You need to work on the flow of your articles as currently they are very hard to read. Instances such as starting sentences with and or using the word got. I don’t wish to be that guy who corrects people on their gramma but when you are presenting to such a large audience, it matters. If you could think about your sentence structures to improve reading flow and which words you use that would make for a far better experience for The Verge’s loyal followers. Thanks
